The Vanishing
I vanish in the fog,
a literate man in a video age
a hypertext body dissolved by hydrometers,
a corporeal existence seeped in dense sea stratus;
saturated by images,
pixel shrouded postmodern mist,
a final form of deciphered flesh,
deconstructed bits of binary extract,
without even a mote of dust to
impart a corpuscular existence
a mortal gleam in optic strand,
an analog ego surrendered
to the ones and zeros of electric oblation
such disappearances are witnessed only by a digital eye
in the dark night of condensation
as dew drops mix with recombinant dna,
and fall with the weighted sentience of rain,
their vaporous apparitions
washing once more into the pores of the planet,
an osmosis of soul forms within cytoplasm of orb
of crystallizing intelligence archiving an incarnation
etching thought traces in silicon,
before rising again in the cycle of water
before vanishing into a carbon dusk
before the tyranny of entropy overcomes species destiny
as dust and device converge in cybernetic continuum
bound for some promised (virtual) Elysium
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Re: the vanishing ( a poem part 1)
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ronjon
on Sat 05 Nov 2005 12:15 PM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
So evocative Rich, I could feel the post-post modern fog swirling around me as I read it.
Perhaps accentuated by the fact that Kim and I spent hours last night emmersed in the virtual world of "Second Life" ... For me, the poem has a melancholy quality. Did you intend this, or is that just my personal reaction? Re: the vanishing ( a poem part 1)
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Rich
on Sun 06 Nov 2005 12:09 PM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
hi Ron
I have just started having Ravi showing me around Second Life and it seems pretty amazing, although I am not sure if I understand the full implications of it, and what it may signal for the future. Perhaps you could give your take on it. Regarding the poem thanks, its voice did not so much aim at melancholy, but at a sort of post-modern resignation, to becoming virtual. The vanishing aspect it aimed to portray was of the vanishing into technology, so perhaps there is a feeling of alienation which may come across as well. p.s. speaking of the vanishing into tech, I am about to vanish into this new imac we got complete with video conf capabilities built in. So when you are ready I am itching to try it out. rc Re: I'm ready for Mac video conferencing
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ronjon
on Sun 06 Nov 2005 05:22 PM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
>I am about to vanish into this new imac we got complete with video conf capabilities built in. So when you are ready I am itching to try it out ...
All right Rich! I'll dig my Mac video camera out right now & play with it a bit to recall how it works. Then we can talk about what my take is re Second Life, etc. Ok, I've got my iSight camera and iChat all set up. What's your .Mac or AOL IM screen name? - My is: rjon11@mac.com . What fun! ~ ron Re: the vanishing ( a poem part 1)
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Rich
on Sun 06 Nov 2005 07:14 PM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
Hi Ron
I got the screenname pacificweather on AIM, so thats what I will be. (now all I need to get is some face time with the new imac as Nishi and Ravi are busy expolring, but this is cool and will certainly facilitate the Process!!! rich Re: Video iChat
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ronjon
on Sun 06 Nov 2005 11:37 PM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
Hi Rich,
Sorry if I wasn't available on iChat when you logged on. Kim & I were watching the "live debate episode" on the West Wing, & I just now got logged back on and saw your comment above. I've now set your AIM screen name to "pacificweather" so I should be able to see you when you logon, though you may well have retired by now. Oh well, perhaps tomorrow afternoon? - I feel like a kid with a new toy! :> ~ ron Re: the vanishing ( a poem part 1)
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Rich
on Mon 07 Nov 2005 09:40 AM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
Hi Ron
Later this aft, should be fine maybe around 5 or so. rich Re: the vanishing or video ichat
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Rich
on Mon 07 Nov 2005 11:58 AM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
thats strange when I posted a comment in response to the imac email/ video ichat email, it got listed under the vanishing
anyway I thought about 5 or so, but if you are free at other times could perhaps do it then as well rich Re: Re: the vanishing or video ichat
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ronjon
on Mon 07 Nov 2005 01:51 PM PST | Profile | Permanent Link
Rich,
5:00 today for our video iChat is good for me too. >thats strange when I posted a comment in response to the imac email/ video ichat email, it got listed under the vanishing.. That's because you were replying to my comment, which was part of a comment tree to your original vanishing article. You can see the entire tree by going to the original article and scrolling down the page. Keeping track of all these comments is why it's important to use BH's neat comment threading capability. Here's the ref re how it works. ~ ron |
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